assigment #17

a) What did you learn from Greg and Beth Ann? (at least 2 things)

Rap is a poem to a  beat and everything is a poem.

b.) When writing your own poem, what did you use as inspiration? (at least 3 things)

Things that gave me inspiration are people,events and books.

c.) What are you most proud of from your poem or your presentation of it? (at least one thing)

That I had a lot of rhyming words.

d.) How did you feel before you performed?

I felt a little nervous at first.

e.) How did you feel AFTER you performed?

I felt pretty good after I performed.

f.) What would you change about your own poem or performance for next time? (at least 1 thing)

I would try to memorize my poem.

g.) What did you learn/like about someone else's poem?

I liked Walid's poem because he had a really good point of view.

Slam 321

3 I am looking for ward to writing a propose slam poem,writing response to poems and learn how to better pace my poems.
2 they reinforced me by saying everything is creative.And everything is poetry.
1 Empathy is certainly one of the things most important in life Sometimes people get in to strife Then they feel guilty and not in good cheer So they go up to someone dear What do I do this time? It’s not like I’m a mime I have a voice I had a choice
 Some people drive a Royce Royce Some people don’t have a voice Some people go home and do some praying Some people go home and do some dragon slaying But life isn’t World of War craft
 Life isn’t a walk in the park Like Noah’s arc One of the toughest times in ages He was a sage Empathy was what we did on stage
Like them people that are hurtin Because someone was blurting them secrets around Later feeling not so very proudMake’em look like a clown With a big fat frown his face And he wearing the crown of disgrace But the guy across the room knows how he feels cause he been in the same place Twice and it’s not very nice So do me a favour Every time you disagree  Make sure you give a proper apology Try to make sure that the hurt in gone Cause hurtin is wrong For you and for me

Tenses quiz

I took my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We walked down the aisles .I noticed that another pet owner was walking her dragon towards us. My dragon will ignore the other dragon to look at the zesty mango salad .The other dragon flies in and grab grabbed the salad right under my dragons nose .

Yesterday

I took my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We walked up and down the aisles .I noticed that another pet owner was walking her dragon towards us. My dragon ignored the other dragon to look at the zesty mango salad .The other dragon flue in and grabbed the salad right under my dragon’s nose. My fat cat Dragon called the manager.

Today                      

I take my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We walk up

and down the aisles .I notice that another pet owner is walking her dragon towards us. My dragon ignores the other dragon to a the zesty mango salad .The other dragon flies in and grabs the salad right under my dragons nose .My fat cat Dragon calls for the manager

Tomorrow

I will take my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We will walked up and down the aisles .I might  notice that another pet owner was walking their dragon towards us. My dragon will probably ignore the other dragon to look at the zesty mango salad .The other dragon might fly in and grab the salad from right under my dragons nose .My fat cat dragon  will call for manager.

My letter from world war 2.

 Date: April 15.1945

 Dear Chief Oganda  
 Hope all is well .

How are oruglemetu and Uidah, tonight we are having a great Celebration held by King Gorge.I needed a golden mask to get entry to the party  party and the only place in London   that still had one was in the Wayfarer market in the north part of town.So I went to the Royal palace.The party was fun it ended at 11.00 pm Sharp.Get a load of this some people got kicked out for .As for on the Battlefield I am one of the "Lucky" solders since I am a Sharpshooter so I don't see many act of gore.But what I see horrifies me.I am to afraid to get close to people so that if I lose them I won't feel too bad.Although my only friends took down 20 Germans.Major says I can get my term of leave in two weeks.Please give my love to my Family.          

     Sincerely Malue.

        

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