a) What did you learn from Greg and Beth Ann? (at least 2 things)
Rap is a poem to a beat and everything is a poem.
b.) When writing your own poem, what did you use as inspiration? (at least 3 things)
Things that gave me inspiration are people,events and books.
c.) What are you most proud of from your poem or your presentation of it? (at least one thing)
That I had a lot of rhyming words.
d.) How did you feel before you performed?
I felt a little nervous at first.
e.) How did you feel AFTER you performed?
I felt pretty good after I performed.
f.) What would you change about your own poem or performance for next time? (at least 1 thing)
I would try to memorize my poem.
g.) What did you learn/like about someone else's poem?
I liked Walid's poem because he had a really good point of view.
Wednesday, December 15, 2010
Slam 321
3 I am looking for ward to writing a propose slam poem,writing response to poems and learn how to better pace my poems.
2 they reinforced me by saying everything is creative.And everything is poetry.
1 Empathy is certainly one of the things most important in life Sometimes people get in to strife Then they feel guilty and not in good cheer So they go up to someone dear What do I do this time? It’s not like I’m a mime I have a voice I had a choice
Some people drive a Royce Royce Some people don’t have a voice Some people go home and do some praying Some people go home and do some dragon slaying But life isn’t World of War craft
Life isn’t a walk in the park Like Noah’s arc One of the toughest times in ages He was a sage Empathy was what we did on stage
Like them people that are hurtin Because someone was blurting them secrets around Later feeling not so very proudMake’em look like a clown With a big fat frown his face And he wearing the crown of disgrace But the guy across the room knows how he feels cause he been in the same place Twice and it’s not very nice So do me a favour Every time you disagree Make sure you give a proper apology Try to make sure that the hurt in gone Cause hurtin is wrong For you and for me
2 they reinforced me by saying everything is creative.And everything is poetry.
1 Empathy is certainly one of the things most important in life Sometimes people get in to strife Then they feel guilty and not in good cheer So they go up to someone dear What do I do this time? It’s not like I’m a mime I have a voice I had a choice
Some people drive a Royce Royce Some people don’t have a voice Some people go home and do some praying Some people go home and do some dragon slaying But life isn’t World of War craft
Life isn’t a walk in the park Like Noah’s arc One of the toughest times in ages He was a sage Empathy was what we did on stage
Like them people that are hurtin Because someone was blurting them secrets around Later feeling not so very proudMake’em look like a clown With a big fat frown his face And he wearing the crown of disgrace But the guy across the room knows how he feels cause he been in the same place Twice and it’s not very nice So do me a favour Every time you disagree Make sure you give a proper apology Try to make sure that the hurt in gone Cause hurtin is wrong For you and for me
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