a) What did you learn from Greg and Beth Ann? (at least 2 things)
Rap is a poem to a beat and everything is a poem.
b.) When writing your own poem, what did you use as inspiration? (at least 3 things)
Things that gave me inspiration are people,events and books.
c.) What are you most proud of from your poem or your presentation of it? (at least one thing)
That I had a lot of rhyming words.
d.) How did you feel before you performed?
I felt a little nervous at first.
e.) How did you feel AFTER you performed?
I felt pretty good after I performed.
f.) What would you change about your own poem or performance for next time? (at least 1 thing)
I would try to memorize my poem.
g.) What did you learn/like about someone else's poem?
I liked Walid's poem because he had a really good point of view.
Wednesday, December 15, 2010
Slam 321
3 I am looking for ward to writing a propose slam poem,writing response to poems and learn how to better pace my poems.
2 they reinforced me by saying everything is creative.And everything is poetry.
1 Empathy is certainly one of the things most important in life Sometimes people get in to strife Then they feel guilty and not in good cheer So they go up to someone dear What do I do this time? It’s not like I’m a mime I have a voice I had a choice
Some people drive a Royce Royce Some people don’t have a voice Some people go home and do some praying Some people go home and do some dragon slaying But life isn’t World of War craft
Life isn’t a walk in the park Like Noah’s arc One of the toughest times in ages He was a sage Empathy was what we did on stage
Like them people that are hurtin Because someone was blurting them secrets around Later feeling not so very proudMake’em look like a clown With a big fat frown his face And he wearing the crown of disgrace But the guy across the room knows how he feels cause he been in the same place Twice and it’s not very nice So do me a favour Every time you disagree Make sure you give a proper apology Try to make sure that the hurt in gone Cause hurtin is wrong For you and for me
2 they reinforced me by saying everything is creative.And everything is poetry.
1 Empathy is certainly one of the things most important in life Sometimes people get in to strife Then they feel guilty and not in good cheer So they go up to someone dear What do I do this time? It’s not like I’m a mime I have a voice I had a choice
Some people drive a Royce Royce Some people don’t have a voice Some people go home and do some praying Some people go home and do some dragon slaying But life isn’t World of War craft
Life isn’t a walk in the park Like Noah’s arc One of the toughest times in ages He was a sage Empathy was what we did on stage
Like them people that are hurtin Because someone was blurting them secrets around Later feeling not so very proudMake’em look like a clown With a big fat frown his face And he wearing the crown of disgrace But the guy across the room knows how he feels cause he been in the same place Twice and it’s not very nice So do me a favour Every time you disagree Make sure you give a proper apology Try to make sure that the hurt in gone Cause hurtin is wrong For you and for me
Friday, November 19, 2010
Tenses quiz
I took my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We walked down the aisles .I noticed that another pet owner was walking her dragon towards us. My dragon will ignore the other dragon to look at the zesty mango salad .The other dragon flies in and grab grabbed the salad right under my dragons nose .
Yesterday
I took my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We walked up and down the aisles .I noticed that another pet owner was walking her dragon towards us. My dragon ignored the other dragon to look at the zesty mango salad .The other dragon flue in and grabbed the salad right under my dragon’s nose. My fat cat Dragon called the manager.
Today
I take my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We walk up
and down the aisles .I notice that another pet owner is walking her dragon towards us. My dragon ignores the other dragon to a the zesty mango salad .The other dragon flies in and grabs the salad right under my dragons nose .My fat cat Dragon calls for the manager
Tomorrow
I will take my pet dragon to the grocery store,A&P.We will walked up and down the aisles .I might notice that another pet owner was walking their dragon towards us. My dragon will probably ignore the other dragon to look at the zesty mango salad .The other dragon might fly in and grab the salad from right under my dragons nose .My fat cat dragon will call for manager.
Monday, November 15, 2010
My letter from world war 2.
Date: April 15.1945
Dear Chief Oganda Hope all is well .
How are oruglemetu and Uidah, tonight we are having a great Celebration held by King Gorge.I needed a golden mask to get entry to the party party and the only place in London that still had one was in the Wayfarer market in the north part of town.So I went to the Royal palace.The party was fun it ended at 11.00 pm Sharp.Get a load of this some people got kicked out for .As for on the Battlefield I am one of the "Lucky" solders since I am a Sharpshooter so I don't see many act of gore.But what I see horrifies me.I am to afraid to get close to people so that if I lose them I won't feel too bad.Although my only friends took down 20 Germans.Major says I can get my term of leave in two weeks.Please give my love to my Family.
Sincerely Malue.
Thursday, November 11, 2010
Monday, November 8, 2010
Two Stars and A Wish.
Star 1. I am really proud of my science Test .
Star 2.I am also very proud that this year I got all good marks on my progress report.
Wish: By the end of the term I wish I get at least five" Excellent s" in my learning skills category.
Star 2.I am also very proud that this year I got all good marks on my progress report.
Wish: By the end of the term I wish I get at least five" Excellent s" in my learning skills category.
History Maker.
1.No I was not able to find out my history maker who is Joseph Henri Maurice "the Rocket" Richard, Sr.
2.We both care about human-rights also have nicknames,spoke English born in the summer.
3. He is significant in Canada because he is a Hockey Hall of Fame.
2.We both care about human-rights also have nicknames,spoke English born in the summer.
3. He is significant in Canada because he is a Hockey Hall of Fame.
Thursday, November 4, 2010
Island man
Descriptions /Images | Emotions/Feelings |
Sound of blue surf | Melancholy. |
Small Emerald island | Jealous . |
Grey metallic soar | Intrigued . |
A surge of wheels | Cool. |
Island man heaves himself. | Melancholy. |
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Bleesing
Description/Images | Emotions/Feelings |
The skin cracks like a pod. | Sad, Interesting. |
Naked children screaming in the liquid sun. | Horrified. |
Blessing sings over their small bones. | Melancholy. |
Sometimes the sudden rush of fortune. | Joyous, Happy. |
A roar of tongues. | Melancholy. |
The voice of a kindly god. | Pleased. |
There is never enough water. | Sad, Grateful. |
There highlights Polished to perfection. | Interesting, Amazement. |
Saturday, October 30, 2010
Tuesday, October 26, 2010
2. Social and Personal Services Appeal to me because I am good a cooking and baking.And I find it Fun that's right it's fun.
3.Construction.
wielding,carpentry,Plumbing.
Employment Sector .
Job interview,Prepared speech,Workplace Safety.
Information and technology sector.
Electronics,Graphic design, IT& network support.
Manufacturing sector.
Robotics,Precision machining,Mechanical CADD.
Service sector.
Cooking ,Baking,Aesthetics.
Transportation sector.
Aircraft maintenance,Auto body repair Automotive service.
4.I would like to learn more about the service sector .What is the best part of your job and what is the worst part.How long does it take to become a chef? Would you say this is a good job.
5High school Mother Theresa.under grad at UFT than hopefully an north western.As I want to become a doctor.
References
This one and this one
3.Construction.
wielding,carpentry,Plumbing.
Employment Sector .
Job interview,Prepared speech,Workplace Safety.
Information and technology sector.
Electronics,Graphic design, IT& network support.
Manufacturing sector.
Robotics,Precision machining,Mechanical CADD.
Service sector.
Cooking ,Baking,Aesthetics.
Transportation sector.
Aircraft maintenance,Auto body repair Automotive service.
4.I would like to learn more about the service sector .What is the best part of your job and what is the worst part.How long does it take to become a chef? Would you say this is a good job.
5High school Mother Theresa.under grad at UFT than hopefully an north western.As I want to become a doctor.
References
This one and this one
Wednesday, October 13, 2010
Assignment#3
Behind my name Qavi.Before I started this assignment. I thought my name was very original.Cause I'm probably the the only person in Canada with Qavi as a name.My parents probably chose because they have great hopes for me.My name means Qavi from Al-Qawi in Arabic origin meaning Courageous. Some other interesting things I learned. My Qavi is from Qawi which is from Kavi of Indian origin which means Poet or powerful. Qavi is from Qawi from Kobi of Bengal origin which means the legend. Iwould like the name Etioz or senor Qavo The GREAT.
Thursday, October 7, 2010
Assigment#2
Empathy is certainly one of the things most important in life
Sometimes people get in to strife
Then they feel guilty and not in good cheer
So they go up to someone dear
What do I do this time?
It’s not like I’m a mime
I have a voice I had a choice
Some people drive a Royce Royce
Some people don’t have a voice
Some people go home and do some praying
Some people go home and do some dragon slaying
But life isn’t World of War craft
Life isn’t a walk in the park
Like Noah’s arc
One of the toughest times in ages
He was a sage
Empathy was what we did on stage
Like them people that are hurtin
Because someone was blurting them secrets around
Later feeling not so very proud
Make’em look like a clown
With a big fat frown his face
And he wearing the crown of disgrace
But the guy across the room knows how he feels cause he been in the same place
Twice and it’s not very nice
So do me a favour
Every time you disagree
Make sure you give a proper apology
Try to make sure that the hurtin gone
Cause hurtin is wrong
For you and for me
Empathy Student of the Month Presentation
3 Things that I think would have helped to improve our presentation.
- I think that some people should have spoke with a louder voices.
- Our presentation would have a flowed better if had more time to rehearse.
- Lots of people were moving during the sleep sequence(Qavi).
2 Things that I think went really well.
- The Oustrage and the Dog was realy good because Sara had a very loud and clear.
- And The rap needed no improvement because flew very well .
1 Piece of advice I have for students who will be performing in the future.
- If you mess up just wing it and the croud will never know.
Peace out Homedog.
Wednesday, October 6, 2010
Welcome
Hello people of earth Qavi.Readers I'm so Happy That You guys are Reading my blog.Some times I sing in the Sower .That's A joke I make Lots of those in a day.my favorite subject is Science I am Doing this blog for school because my TEACHER IS PRO and my blog will be linked to a couple of other students from other schools across Ontario. Enough about this project lets talk about me I am in grade eight sport is soccer and my favorite Brazil,Spain..Love PlayStation 3because it is awesome.Please leave comments and questions below."Thank you come again"in a good Apu voice.
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